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Hi TimeOnMyHands,
I genuinely like this poem as-is. It is very cute and several phrases made me get that 'awww' feeling like when I watch an Alpo commercial and the guy is hugging the dog at the end . . . only better because it is about humans

Anyway, here are my thoughts:

White sheets, raining sweets, finger holes for eyes.
little steps, out with pets, door knocked surprise. --'Little steps' was a nice image (I could see the 'waddle' like little kids always have)

Rain mac's, candle wax, fright night parade.
Goblin hobb, graves to rob, costumes tailor made. --All of this works fine for me, but the two lines seem uneven to me- then again I could have it wrong. Content: A, Flow: C+ )

Open door, six or more, hands outstretched for treats.
Behind my back, in a sac, a home made head and sweets.

. . . and a good tidy closer that has a sustained feeling of tension . . . a good kind of tension, though.

Thanks for sharing your work.