10-06-2012, 08:08 AM
1st draft
White sheets, raining sweets, finger holes for eyes.
little steps, out with pets, door knocked surprise.
Rain mac's, candle wax, fright night parade.
Goblin hobb, graves to rob, costumes tailor made.
Open door, six or more, hands outstretched for treats.
Behind my back, in a sac, a home made head and sweets.
2nd Edit (Thank you all for your comments)
White sheets, raining sweets, finger-holes for eyes.
Little steps, out with pets, door knocked surprise.
Rain mac's, candle wax, fright night parade.
Goblin hobb, graves to rob, costumes ready made.
Light dims, sharp-teeth grins, Pumpkin shadow stare
Darkness falls, doorbell calls, press me if you dare.
Open door, six or more, hands outstretched for treats.
Behind my back, in a sack, a home made head and sweets.
White sheets, raining sweets, finger holes for eyes.
little steps, out with pets, door knocked surprise.
Rain mac's, candle wax, fright night parade.
Goblin hobb, graves to rob, costumes tailor made.
Open door, six or more, hands outstretched for treats.
Behind my back, in a sac, a home made head and sweets.
2nd Edit (Thank you all for your comments)
White sheets, raining sweets, finger-holes for eyes.
Little steps, out with pets, door knocked surprise.
Rain mac's, candle wax, fright night parade.
Goblin hobb, graves to rob, costumes ready made.
Light dims, sharp-teeth grins, Pumpkin shadow stare
Darkness falls, doorbell calls, press me if you dare.
Open door, six or more, hands outstretched for treats.
Behind my back, in a sack, a home made head and sweets.