Promenading; A Social Activity
#4
S4L3 "too" should be "to".

I'm finding this truly enjoyable, Billy. I especially like S5&6. Your descriptions are immaculate, even if the dirty thoughts are not Wink

Quite possibly my favorite of your offerings.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Promenading; A Social Activity - by billy - 10-05-2012, 03:15 PM
RE: Promenading A Social Activity - by Leanne - 10-05-2012, 03:44 PM
RE: Promenading A Social Activity - by billy - 10-05-2012, 03:50 PM
RE: Promenading A Social Activity - by Aish - 10-06-2012, 03:29 AM
RE: Promenading A Social Activity - by billy - 10-06-2012, 06:51 AM
RE: Promenading; A Social Activity - by billy - 10-09-2012, 06:45 AM
RE: Promenading; A Social Activity - by rowens - 10-09-2012, 10:22 PM
RE: Promenading; A Social Activity - by billy - 10-10-2012, 06:47 AM



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