Youth Club Disco

[Leanne]

Dunlop green flash whitened for the night, Heavy metal badges on a wrangler and bleached jeans that are too tight.
Down the brook drinking cans of special brew, I still wrench at the thought of necking Clandew. -- retch?
We get served because my mate has a beard, and we're only 14 so that’s a bit weird. -- love this image
Slapping footsteps in a drunken run, alcohol consumed, the night has begun.
Ticket in pocket, met friends on the way, Album under arm, with a great track to play.
Queued on the door but quickly inside, the smell of stale halls were youth clubs reside.
Can’t move for kids 14 and above all feeling great and looking for love.
Been up to the decks so my song will get played, 'Highway to Hell' and we’re on centre stage.
The drink kicks in and my face has gone numb, Lizzy are on inhibitions have gone. -- gone is used twice here, maybe "turned numb"?
Bounce through the night head banging for fun, can’t get up to the Jam and the Pistols are on.
Avoid the psychotics whose main aim is to scrap, stick with my mates and sit at the back.
The night slows down and the main lights blind our eyes, it’s time to leave and we’re quickly outside.
Walking home and my mouth is dry, shouting a song at the clear night sky.
The chip shop pilgrimage has begun, as the lemming like hoards move as one.
Onto the high Street to watch the Silver stream fight, Police turn up so that it for the night.
Try to be quite because I'm too young to drink but I always get caught because I'm too young to think. -- quiet
Stupid grins and gravy stained shirt, I tiptoed past parents on full alert.
Finally in bed as the room slowly spins, Friday night folds as the weekend begins.

Whoa, blasts from the past abound here! Clan Dew was something like Stone's Mac, I believe... a wonderfully awfully horrible brew of god-knows-what that pretended to be distantly related to whisky I really enjoyed the scene (yours, not the actual scene, that's best forgotten!).

Overall, the meter could be tightened up but you set a good pace. To fix it fully wouldn't actually take that much effort, but it's too much for me to tackle in mild critique

Thanks for the read.