10-04-2012, 02:00 PM
What a delightful piece. From the beginning you really can't tell how the poem forms out and the meter variations and "errors" seem almost deliberate.
When you look at it, it feels very long, but when you read it, it's an enjoyable ride all the way. Good work.
When you look at it, it feels very long, but when you read it, it's an enjoyable ride all the way. Good work.