10-03-2012, 01:46 PM
It starts with Christina? It's called a step-down acrostic, like Poe's "Enigma". Some of your imagery is lovely, especially in S3, but to be honest, I hate the forced rhymes -- couplets make this seem cheesy. The meter isn't really a problem (PS. every poem has meter and so does prose, really -- it's just not always regular or fixed). There are a few other issues but this isn't for serious critique, so I'll just leave by saying I think it's a good idea with a less than perfect execution.
It could be worse