10-02-2012, 10:53 PM
So, Mikey B,
This feels like a rap or at the least spoken word. As those, it probably does fairly well. Critiquing it as a written poem would be another thing.
What are you looking for in serious critique with this one? Anything specific?
Best,
Todd
This feels like a rap or at the least spoken word. As those, it probably does fairly well. Critiquing it as a written poem would be another thing.
What are you looking for in serious critique with this one? Anything specific?
Best,
Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson