10-01-2012, 08:54 AM
Thanks for your great feedback rowens
You're right about the typo; I'll edit that in a mo. This poem feels very fragmented and rambling to me. I may return to this theme to see if I can discuss it more artfully.
You're right about the typo; I'll edit that in a mo. This poem feels very fragmented and rambling to me. I may return to this theme to see if I can discuss it more artfully.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe