morning

[MrA]

Sometimes


when the lake catches fire,
the surrealist adventure persists,now a surrealist would be a person and the person's adventure. That would then be: surrealist's.
before the stimulant passes lips
and that Eastern face makes it real,
the wildebeest stampedes
between a faceless lovers thighslover's
and fetal shapes affix limbs
to the horror of another morning.maybe you know what you're getting at, but the reader doesn't. Too cryptic with no hint of what you mean

the moon falls, wing-brokenI like the image here

The day stinks of reality
like blue cheese or violent priests,
nibbling at innocent crackers
in some inner Mississippi
that threatens us with cubicles
filled with images of those for
whom we are never good enough
affixed to make-believe walls.this is the second use of the word 'affix'. I'd suggest using a different word

Sometimes, I scream.why? Be specific, maybe you could just do without this line