09-30-2012, 10:01 AM
Did you intentionally use the first strophe as an acrostic?
This feels like a spoken word piece. I can dig it that way, and my own emotional self right now just latched on to the brokenness. Fuck's sake. I don't even like rhyme.
This feels like a spoken word piece. I can dig it that way, and my own emotional self right now just latched on to the brokenness. Fuck's sake. I don't even like rhyme.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?