The Moment of Impact.
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I agree... there's a groove to the narrator's speech that lightens the piece. I like "plugs to sockets// cellphones to pockets" -- it grounded and further humanized the piece. It ends on a dry note, which really suits it Smile.

Thanks for the share
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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The Moment of Impact. - by SpoiledInk - 09-30-2012, 08:09 AM
RE: The Moment of Impact. - by billy - 09-30-2012, 09:00 AM
RE: The Moment of Impact. - by SpoiledInk - 09-30-2012, 02:45 PM
RE: The Moment of Impact. - by addy - 09-30-2012, 09:35 AM
RE: The Moment of Impact. - by Aish - 09-30-2012, 10:01 AM
RE: The Moment of Impact. - by billy - 09-30-2012, 03:01 PM



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