09-28-2012, 11:00 AM
I pulled these out of my 2007 notebooks when the movie thread brought them to mind. The 'none one' is me playing with dialects again, for tone value. Is there more about the stanza you don't like? The mystery muse woman finds her way into many of my poems. Actually, the poems I write when I've been with her tend to be more coherent to others. Though she's rarely coherent to me.