09-28-2012, 10:53 AM
@billy, thank you for the read and comment. The mistakes were an Americanism- in that it was impatient overlooking mistakes. Fixed up, thanks on that. The metaphors are cross sections of other sketches I made on this idea. Perhaps too intricate, I agree, hoping it doesn't get lost, but the more straight forward approaches I penned lacked any luster for me.

