there's enough poets to bury the sun
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Hey, Philatone. Thanks for the feedback; late doesn't really apply with feedback I think.
The double single words is probably the part I disliked the most in there if I'm honest.
I struggle sometimes to see how cryptic things are when I write as it's clear in my mind so I'll take that into account. Again, thanks.
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there's enough poets to bury the sun - by MrA - 09-22-2012, 06:47 PM
RE: there's enough poets to bury the sun - by MrA - 09-23-2012, 07:23 AM
RE: there's enough poets to bury the sun - by MrA - 09-23-2012, 10:06 PM
RE: there's enough poets to bury the sun - by MrA - 09-25-2012, 05:30 AM



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