09-24-2012, 02:38 AM
if this is serious critique im not sugarcoating anything here I only got better when people gave me constructive criticism and im going to do the same for this poem
you seem to have the passion and heart to write love poetry
if you can brush up on not using the same words over and over
with some revision and a good thesaurus this poem can be a stand out peace
you seem to have the passion and heart to write love poetry
if you can brush up on not using the same words over and over
with some revision and a good thesaurus this poem can be a stand out peace