there's enough poets to bury the sun
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Well thanks, Billy.

Yeah I definitely need to do something about the single words. I'll take it back to the drawing board with the above suggestions in mind and I agree, most poems about poetry seem a little trite.
I'll take a look at the 'taste' options too but I doubt there's much I can do there.
Again, thanks for the honest feedback. Smile
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there's enough poets to bury the sun - by MrA - 09-22-2012, 06:47 PM
RE: there's enough poets to bury the sun - by MrA - 09-23-2012, 07:23 AM
RE: there's enough poets to bury the sun - by MrA - 09-23-2012, 10:06 PM
RE: there's enough poets to bury the sun - by MrA - 09-25-2012, 05:30 AM



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