09-23-2012, 07:23 AM
Well thanks, Aish.
I was just walking the dogs outside(gone midnight), and I thought:
The moonlight is phenomenal tonight.
As I watched my shadow drift ahead of me, then I remembered lamposts exist and it was the street's light. Just an example of how entwined concrete life has become.
Anyway, usually I would avoid a minimalist write like this and can totally empathise with what you say about the bullet points, should of separated them a little. I think I threw too many syllables at the fake moon, but wanted to avoid saying 'moon looks fake', I'll have a look.
Again, thanks.
I was just walking the dogs outside(gone midnight), and I thought:
The moonlight is phenomenal tonight.
As I watched my shadow drift ahead of me, then I remembered lamposts exist and it was the street's light. Just an example of how entwined concrete life has become.
Anyway, usually I would avoid a minimalist write like this and can totally empathise with what you say about the bullet points, should of separated them a little. I think I threw too many syllables at the fake moon, but wanted to avoid saying 'moon looks fake', I'll have a look.
Again, thanks.