09-23-2012, 07:07 AM
I think you misspelled ' carcasses'.
I love the first and final lines. I want to love the second. Maybe torn throats instead of carcasses?
I love the first and final lines. I want to love the second. Maybe torn throats instead of carcasses?
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?