09-22-2012, 10:12 AM
So is the fly . . . I mean what is the dif- erm . . . I don't get it 
I normally don't get stuff when everyone else does because I am an illiterate redneck
In general I thought the first poem was good, but I will need to visit it a time or two to make sure that I give it a chance to make sense to me . . .The second poem didn't end like I expected it to so I was again perplexed.
Why is the fly gay again? And is this a set of poems that are presented as a set or have you chosen to post them here for another reason?I am anxious to see some of your other stuff . . . off to read
Thanks for sharing.

