Building A Nest Much More Complicated
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i like the vocals and it feels as though it flows well and i like the writing but, and i don't know if it's a big or small but;
i'm struggling to understand ( i think).

as an observer, i get a feeling that there was a split and this is almost a plea for a renewal of a broken relationship. i did like the read, and i get the feeling that any failings to understand are mine Blush
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Building A Nest Much More Complicated - by rowens - 09-20-2012, 01:29 AM
RE: Building A Nest Much More Complicated - by billy - 09-21-2012, 01:07 PM
RE: Building A Nest Much More Complicated - by rowens - 09-21-2012, 10:41 PM
RE: Building A Nest Much More Complicated - by rowens - 09-24-2012, 01:37 AM
RE: Building A Nest Much More Complicated - by rowens - 09-24-2012, 11:58 PM



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