The view from my high horse

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I really liked this rich. Lots of original lines, and lots of character. I felt there may be two different poems in here, as the poem seems to kind of switch gears and switch subjects once it gets to the narrator's personal musings midway through. That's just my personal take though

The meter and rhyme could be made more consistent. I liked the informality of some of the rhymes though; gave it a colloquial flavor. An excellent effort, especially for someone new to poetry