The Platonic Waitress
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it has a vampiric quality about it.
with a dash of bukowskism thrown in.

Let me flirt with the soul inside of you, over a seven dollar tip
And a borrowed cellphone―forever turned on,
To prevent me from kissing you if I get too drunk on my love.


i think the above carries the essence of the poem, though the rest of it makes for good reading.
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The Platonic Waitress - by rowens - 09-16-2012, 05:06 AM
RE: The Platonic Waitress - by billy - 09-16-2012, 09:52 AM
RE: The Platonic Waitress - by rowens - 09-17-2012, 02:06 AM
RE: The Platonic Waitress - by billy - 09-18-2012, 11:55 AM



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