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I've Always Wanted a Pig Farm:
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09-15-2012, 08:36 AM
I really like the descriptions in this... it paints a very earthy picture. At some points I got the impression that you were holding back, though? Phrasing like "A not unpleasant stench..." or "a slight heady spell..." sounded like you were toning things down, though why I'm not sure.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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I've Always Wanted a Pig Farm: - by billy - 09-13-2012, 06:41 PM
RE: I've Always Wanted a Pig Farm: - by rowens - 09-15-2012, 12:28 AM
RE: I've Always Wanted a Pig Farm: - by billy - 09-16-2012, 09:54 AM
RE: I've Always Wanted a Pig Farm: - by addy - 09-15-2012, 08:36 AM
RE: I've Always Wanted a Pig Farm: - by popeye - 09-16-2012, 05:56 PM
RE: I've Always Wanted a Pig Farm: - by Philatone - 09-17-2012, 02:13 AM
RE: I've Always Wanted a Pig Farm: - by heslopian - 09-17-2012, 08:48 AM
RE: I've Always Wanted a Pig Farm: - by Wildcard - 09-18-2012, 07:02 AM
RE: I've Always Wanted a Pig Farm: - by rowens - 09-18-2012, 09:02 AM
RE: I've Always Wanted a Pig Farm: - by billy - 09-18-2012, 10:36 AM
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