09-11-2012, 09:17 AM
The comma can go, it's not necessary. The angels fighting is too direct an image. 'Fit' is open to a broader interpretation. As I see it anyway.
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Nervous Cough - by rowens - 09-11-2012, 01:11 AM
RE: Nervous Cough - by heslopian - 09-11-2012, 02:24 AM
RE: Nervous Cough - by rowens - 09-11-2012, 03:04 AM
RE: Nervous Cough - by popeye - 09-11-2012, 06:58 AM
RE: Nervous Cough - by rowens - 09-11-2012, 09:17 AM
RE: Nervous Cough - by addy - 09-11-2012, 11:02 AM
RE: Nervous Cough - by billy - 09-11-2012, 12:49 PM
RE: Nervous Cough - by rowens - 09-11-2012, 02:04 PM
RE: Nervous Cough - by billy - 09-11-2012, 02:13 PM
RE: Nervous Cough - by rowens - 09-11-2012, 02:30 PM
RE: Nervous Cough - by billy - 09-11-2012, 02:50 PM
RE: Nervous Cough - by rowens - 09-12-2012, 12:28 AM
RE: Nervous Cough - by rowens - 09-12-2012, 04:43 AM
RE: Nervous Cough - by billy - 09-12-2012, 08:32 AM
RE: Nervous Cough - by rowens - 09-12-2012, 10:39 PM
RE: Nervous Cough - by rowens - 09-14-2012, 03:59 AM
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