Nervous Cough
#3
I remember that I took that comma out and then put it back before I posted it. It doesn't make sense to be there, but I was trying give a vague distance between 'my throat' and 'I've' as subjects. On the version I copied out I removed it again. I knew somebody here was going to get me about that comma.

I was thinking 'fit' could play on its several meanings. Can you see it that way?
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Nervous Cough - by rowens - 09-11-2012, 01:11 AM
RE: Nervous Cough - by heslopian - 09-11-2012, 02:24 AM
RE: Nervous Cough - by rowens - 09-11-2012, 03:04 AM
RE: Nervous Cough - by popeye - 09-11-2012, 06:58 AM
RE: Nervous Cough - by rowens - 09-11-2012, 09:17 AM
RE: Nervous Cough - by addy - 09-11-2012, 11:02 AM
RE: Nervous Cough - by billy - 09-11-2012, 12:49 PM
RE: Nervous Cough - by rowens - 09-11-2012, 02:04 PM
RE: Nervous Cough - by billy - 09-11-2012, 02:13 PM
RE: Nervous Cough - by rowens - 09-11-2012, 02:30 PM
RE: Nervous Cough - by billy - 09-11-2012, 02:50 PM
RE: Nervous Cough - by rowens - 09-12-2012, 12:28 AM
RE: Nervous Cough - by rowens - 09-12-2012, 04:43 AM
RE: Nervous Cough - by billy - 09-12-2012, 08:32 AM
RE: Nervous Cough - by rowens - 09-12-2012, 10:39 PM
RE: Nervous Cough - by rowens - 09-14-2012, 03:59 AM



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