Lethe

[billy]

i like the musical references.
the title fits in with the poem extremely well.
it got me to thinking about the crossroads
where the devil makes a bet on who can play the best.
i got i feeling of darkness and a resolution of things not getting better.
that we are what we are.. that things simmer underneath the masks we wear.

i enjoyed it. should there be a comma after dust ib the 2nd l of the 2nd stanza?

thanks for the read.