09-08-2012, 05:09 AM
Sorry billy, busy week that has led to no thought about kyrielles 
This is certainly a funny poem, but as is the case with many of the better funny poems, it's also got quite a depth to it (in light of its original title, which I'd like to see here as well). The implication of spending time in the company of one's talking teddy is that drink has driven the real companions away. Meter, rhyme and form are all spot on, making the poem so much more enjoyable.
Not a bad effort, sir!
This is certainly a funny poem, but as is the case with many of the better funny poems, it's also got quite a depth to it (in light of its original title, which I'd like to see here as well). The implication of spending time in the company of one's talking teddy is that drink has driven the real companions away. Meter, rhyme and form are all spot on, making the poem so much more enjoyable.
Not a bad effort, sir!
It could be worse