09-07-2012, 05:51 PM
after a few reads looking for something to say that needs work, i'm struggling....
is 'anyway' needed on L4?
i found it bright and open and it felt honest and truthful;
even if perhaps it wasn't, it had that authenticity
a good narrative poem should have. though i'm not sure plath
ever moaned about your dad
it was short yet so full freshness.
great little read jack
is 'anyway' needed on L4?
i found it bright and open and it felt honest and truthful;
even if perhaps it wasn't, it had that authenticity
a good narrative poem should have. though i'm not sure plath
ever moaned about your dad
it was short yet so full freshness.
great little read jack