Tomorrow Is October For Me Too

[billy]

this is simply my take on poetry, i don't know how valuable it is in other feedbacks, and my take can be criticized too. 'fusion' is a good

i presumed that was what it was about. but what you're saying is "fusion is a good thing in poetry"
fair enough, it seems i got it wrong.

after some circumspective rereading (are they actual words?)
you ask the question;
was my personal view of my poem warped past the point of anyone ever coming close to seeing it as I do without an outside explanation?

the speaker is a child...was your take which i now remember. but in answer to the question you ask; it could have been about a few things, a more definitive core would have helped. and i think it still holds true that it felt too generic, a sort of unbranded read.

that said, i don't think it would take more a few words to give a strong direction to where you'd like the reader to go?