09-01-2012, 05:03 PM
i was on about it still being elusive.
when i mentioned mystique i'm on about the mystery that holds a her or it. i wasn't on about invisibility
when you tell me what the poem is about it's more or less lost to me, any feeling of the meaning becomes too cold.
i suppose i'm greedy in that i want mystique but i also what to be able to understand the mystique that surrounds the subject. the mystique of poetry, or Monroe, i'm not sure if mystique is suppose to obscure it completely.
of course when you tell me what the poem is about i can instantly see what you me but i'm bound too. you telling me what the poem is about and showing me the poem isn't you showing me two things that are the same except to you and i agree, possibly to others.
the 1st line, now that holds and begins the mystique but then it becomes too elusive and the mystique fades into a puzzle.
i can see that its about your take on poetry, but i also see that it's extremely generic and could be about other things,
"this is my poem, it's about mother nature" can you see it?
when i mentioned mystique i'm on about the mystery that holds a her or it. i wasn't on about invisibility
when you tell me what the poem is about it's more or less lost to me, any feeling of the meaning becomes too cold.
i suppose i'm greedy in that i want mystique but i also what to be able to understand the mystique that surrounds the subject. the mystique of poetry, or Monroe, i'm not sure if mystique is suppose to obscure it completely.
of course when you tell me what the poem is about i can instantly see what you me but i'm bound too. you telling me what the poem is about and showing me the poem isn't you showing me two things that are the same except to you and i agree, possibly to others.
the 1st line, now that holds and begins the mystique but then it becomes too elusive and the mystique fades into a puzzle.
i can see that its about your take on poetry, but i also see that it's extremely generic and could be about other things,
"this is my poem, it's about mother nature" can you see it?