09-01-2012, 06:09 AM
(08-30-2012, 07:33 AM)Philatone Wrote: (ital)Tiny little nits, Geoff, this is a keeper
verb
to capture the spirit and lock it up
again behind a curtain of ribs -- "again" is distracting for me, do you need it?
2)
press on the breastbone
to jump a stalling heart
3)
to find new batteries for the dead
flashlight inside of midnight's pocket -- "of" could probably go
It could be worse
