Rianimare
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(08-30-2012, 07:33 AM)Philatone Wrote:  (ital)

verb

to capture the spirit and lock it up
again behind a curtain of ribs -- "again" is distracting for me, do you need it?

2)

press on the breastbone
to jump a stalling heart

3)

to find new batteries for the dead
flashlight inside of midnight's pocket -- "of" could probably go
Tiny little nits, Geoff, this is a keeper Big Grin
It could be worse
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Rianimare - by Philatone - 08-30-2012, 07:33 AM
RE: Rianimare - by billy - 08-30-2012, 08:42 AM
RE: Rianimare - by addy - 08-30-2012, 09:02 AM
RE: Rianimare - by Philatone - 08-31-2012, 11:48 AM
RE: Rianimare - by Leanne - 09-01-2012, 06:09 AM



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