09-01-2012, 05:30 AM
Apart from how most would prefer shorter lines and a more vertical pace, I do enjoy plump little poems with images like this, that have a thick feel, and very subtle movement. Personally I don't pay much attention to rhyme. I like images to creep over my skin more than to soar on musical heights. Sometimes and sometimes not. I even like the "she lowers itself", but I need to read this again later. Then maybe I can say some more.
