Swimming in the Dordogne
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Apart from how most would prefer shorter lines and a more vertical pace, I do enjoy plump little poems with images like this, that have a thick feel, and very subtle movement. Personally I don't pay much attention to rhyme. I like images to creep over my skin more than to soar on musical heights. Sometimes and sometimes not. I even like the "she lowers itself", but I need to read this again later. Then maybe I can say some more.
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Swimming in the Dordogne - by tectak - 08-31-2012, 07:39 PM
RE: Swimming in the Dordogne - by rowens - 09-01-2012, 05:30 AM
RE: Swimming in the Dordogne - by Leanne - 09-01-2012, 05:57 AM
RE: Swimming in the Dordogne - by tectak - 09-01-2012, 08:22 AM
RE: Swimming in the Dordogne - by billy - 09-01-2012, 08:46 AM
RE: Swimming in the Dordogne - by tectak - 09-01-2012, 08:13 PM
RE: Swimming in the Dordogne - by rowens - 09-01-2012, 10:48 AM
RE: Swimming in the Dordogne - by rowens - 09-03-2012, 02:57 AM
RE: Swimming in the Dordogne - by billy - 09-14-2012, 05:45 PM



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