08-31-2012, 11:52 AM
i'd like to see something more solid to help me see the bigger picture of what
is being shown. i've had three or four reads and so far all i remember are the
two excrements , a few electric lights and a couple of pleasures. the poem doesn't
grab me in any way and say "this is the thing"
the last stanza had me feeling that there has to be more than this but the earlier parts;
i can't get a handle on.
thanks for the read.
is being shown. i've had three or four reads and so far all i remember are the
two excrements , a few electric lights and a couple of pleasures. the poem doesn't
grab me in any way and say "this is the thing"
the last stanza had me feeling that there has to be more than this but the earlier parts;
i can't get a handle on.
thanks for the read.