08-30-2012, 08:42 AM
i see it's Italian, but i had to google it 
i like number three
i think the couplets are excellent and wonder if everything but they could go?
but that's a nit as to form i guess. i don't see anything in real need of changing.
thanks for the read and nicely done.
i like number three
i think the couplets are excellent and wonder if everything but they could go?
but that's a nit as to form i guess. i don't see anything in real need of changing.
thanks for the read and nicely done.