Rianimare
#2
i see it's Italian, but i had to google it Smile

i like number three
i think the couplets are excellent and wonder if everything but they could go?

but that's a nit as to form i guess. i don't see anything in real need of changing.
thanks for the read and nicely done.
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Messages In This Thread
Rianimare - by Philatone - 08-30-2012, 07:33 AM
RE: Rianimare - by billy - 08-30-2012, 08:42 AM
RE: Rianimare - by addy - 08-30-2012, 09:02 AM
RE: Rianimare - by Philatone - 08-31-2012, 11:48 AM
RE: Rianimare - by Leanne - 09-01-2012, 06:09 AM



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