08-29-2012, 04:20 PM
Thanks for the critique billy 
. I struggled with this one, and now re-reading it (especially after your comments) it still looks terribly awkward. I suspect I'll need to rewrite this a few times 
. I struggled with this one, and now re-reading it (especially after your comments) it still looks terribly awkward. I suspect I'll need to rewrite this a few times
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?