08-28-2012, 10:37 PM
you three all picking on me? lol
I hate similes I will continue to say write the image don’t expect the reader to read your mind. We don’t all have the same experience,
"it's like stabbing yourself in the leg" and not being able to walk unless it’s like you shit your pants..
OK how many experienced that? hands up! (looks around???) no well I did, and it bloody hurt more pulling the bloody knife out and feeling a right twat for stabbing myself .
"it's like stabbing yourself in the leg"
" it's like feeling a right twat"
"it's like the only twat left in the room is you" Ok done boring eh!! load of shite
In fact the knife went in smooth, painlessly. It was the punch
that made the air escape me, it was the bone that emitted
the scrapping noise taking the point into itself and gripping
while the muscles tightened about the length of the blade.
All of that was insignificant, it was the decision to remove it quickly
that caused the ache of indrawn breath.
I hate similes I will continue to say write the image don’t expect the reader to read your mind. We don’t all have the same experience,
"it's like stabbing yourself in the leg" and not being able to walk unless it’s like you shit your pants..
OK how many experienced that? hands up! (looks around???) no well I did, and it bloody hurt more pulling the bloody knife out and feeling a right twat for stabbing myself .
"it's like stabbing yourself in the leg"
" it's like feeling a right twat"
"it's like the only twat left in the room is you" Ok done boring eh!! load of shite
In fact the knife went in smooth, painlessly. It was the punch
that made the air escape me, it was the bone that emitted
the scrapping noise taking the point into itself and gripping
while the muscles tightened about the length of the blade.
All of that was insignificant, it was the decision to remove it quickly
that caused the ache of indrawn breath.
Perfection changes with the light and light goes on for infinity ~~~Bronte