Tomorrow Is October For Me Too
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"from the crooked spine of your blindness' path" is the part that i never liked about this poem. The words could be different, and made better, but they would still be elusive, unless you consider theyre addressing the woman grown with pain. The poem read on its own doesnt have the benefit of the explanations I gave above. It's more emotional than intellectual, in a spiritual manner, it's a sentimental lament.
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Tomorrow Is October For Me Too - by rowens - 08-25-2012, 09:44 AM
RE: Tomorrow Is October For Me Too - by addy - 08-25-2012, 05:02 PM
RE: Tomorrow Is October For Me Too - by billy - 08-25-2012, 05:27 PM
RE: Tomorrow Is October For Me Too - by rowens - 08-26-2012, 02:50 AM
RE: Tomorrow Is October For Me Too - by billy - 08-26-2012, 10:57 AM
RE: Tomorrow Is October For Me Too - by rowens - 08-26-2012, 01:31 PM
RE: Tomorrow Is October For Me Too - by billy - 08-26-2012, 04:19 PM
RE: Tomorrow Is October For Me Too - by rowens - 08-27-2012, 02:45 AM
RE: Tomorrow Is October For Me Too - by paul k. - 08-27-2012, 06:17 PM
RE: Tomorrow Is October For Me Too - by Philatone - 08-28-2012, 01:05 PM
RE: Tomorrow Is October For Me Too - by rowens - 08-28-2012, 01:34 PM
RE: Tomorrow Is October For Me Too - by billy - 08-31-2012, 11:59 AM
RE: Tomorrow Is October For Me Too - by rowens - 09-01-2012, 12:42 AM
RE: Tomorrow Is October For Me Too - by billy - 09-01-2012, 05:03 PM
RE: Tomorrow Is October For Me Too - by rowens - 09-02-2012, 12:01 AM
RE: Tomorrow Is October For Me Too - by billy - 09-02-2012, 08:15 AM
RE: Tomorrow Is October For Me Too - by rowens - 09-03-2012, 02:53 AM



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