V.2 edit
Unmoving bear lies
miles from the frozen river-
in dreams, fish leap.
V.1
Unmoving bear lies
miles from the icy river -
in dreams, the fish leap.
Unmoving bear lies
miles from the frozen river-
in dreams, fish leap.
V.1
Unmoving bear lies
miles from the icy river -
in dreams, the fish leap.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?