08-20-2012, 03:08 PM
Thanks for the kind feedback, Bilbo
This one was written a while ago, around the same time as The Savages (if you remember that) during a first person narrative phase. I wondered if that last sentence was a bit cheesy. I might remove it, as it feels too neat and obvious.
This one was written a while ago, around the same time as The Savages (if you remember that) during a first person narrative phase. I wondered if that last sentence was a bit cheesy. I might remove it, as it feels too neat and obvious.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe