I Live Over There - revision

[penguin]

ah but it is aiming at their eyes that will make you write better.

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PS

I'm the good looking one with a ponytail on my head and a pointy tail on my bum and flames where my wings should be.

Emily it is then. I've only a limited knowledge of the "poetry mag scene", but I get the impression that poetry editors are interested in what is fashionable, what they invariably refer to as cutting edge poetry, rather than something to be enjoyed. They've also the nerve to disbar anything "published" elsewhere. I just can't be bothered.

Ray