08-18-2012, 07:08 PM
Thanks, Bronte. (Which one are you?)
I can see the attraction of the dogs line as an ending but the current 4 lines that close can only work as an ending and I don't really want to lose them.
I'll think on the other suggestion, though I'm not out to attract the eyes of editors. I'm just trying to write better poetry and I'm also of the "I wouldn't join any club that would have me as a member " persuasion.
Ray
I can see the attraction of the dogs line as an ending but the current 4 lines that close can only work as an ending and I don't really want to lose them.
I'll think on the other suggestion, though I'm not out to attract the eyes of editors. I'm just trying to write better poetry and I'm also of the "I wouldn't join any club that would have me as a member " persuasion.
Ray
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.