My poem
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i think most of my 'poems' fester somewhere, but i like the seeming diametrically opposed thoughts of 'fester' and 'beautiful'. Is 'pretentious' a moment of self doubt? maybe 'at home' might read better 'as thoughts fester but for a few etc etc'. I, too, do not like the use of 'at home' lit does not seem to fit.
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My poem - by billy - 08-13-2012, 11:53 AM
RE: My poem - by addy - 08-13-2012, 12:23 PM
RE: My poem - by billy - 08-13-2012, 04:15 PM
RE: My poem - by Philatone - 08-17-2012, 01:28 PM
RE: My poem - by billy - 08-21-2012, 11:37 AM
RE: My poem - by raymond trevitt - 08-18-2012, 12:35 PM



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