08-18-2012, 12:35 PM
i think most of my 'poems' fester somewhere, but i like the seeming diametrically opposed thoughts of 'fester' and 'beautiful'. Is 'pretentious' a moment of self doubt? maybe 'at home' might read better 'as thoughts fester but for a few etc etc'. I, too, do not like the use of 'at home' lit does not seem to fit.

