I Live Over There

I Live Over There - revision

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#15

08-17-2012, 03:10 PM

Thanks again, Billy. I've changed those 2 offending lines to make the rhyme more approximate.

Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.

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RE: I Live Over There - by tectak - 08-14-2012, 04:48 AM

RE: I Live Over There - by billy - 08-14-2012, 08:37 PM

RE: I Live Over There - by penguin - 08-14-2012, 11:36 PM

RE: I Live Over There - by tectak - 08-15-2012, 05:31 PM

RE: I Live Over There - by billy - 08-15-2012, 09:16 AM

RE: I Live Over There - by penguin - 08-15-2012, 06:22 PM

RE: I Live Over There - by billy - 08-15-2012, 08:06 PM

RE: I Live Over There - revision - by penguin - 08-17-2012, 03:10 PM

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