08-17-2012, 02:19 AM
Quite right about the comma, Phaedra. Thanks.
Thanks, Jack. I wonder if those lines you mention weren't better in the original.Mind you, crossing and vomit is a fair enough rhyme for me.
Thanks, Jack. I wonder if those lines you mention weren't better in the original.Mind you, crossing and vomit is a fair enough rhyme for me.
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.