Can't Let Go (was Well, here goes nuthin)

[addy]

I actually like what you were doing with this piece. And I really like the last verse, but it didn't feel so much like a conclusion for me, at least not a conclusion for this particular poem: each stanza is preluded with "to dad, to mike, to mark"... but I'm not sure you told them anything. That's just the impression i got.

Thanks very much for the read, and hope to see more of your work