08-14-2012, 08:45 PM
You could avoid the crimson problem and the repetition of skin by using "flesh" /leaving only a liquid crimson mess - a near enough rhyme for my liking.
I don't like the title. Filth is usually found outside and seems the wrong word for something inside the body. But I guess it depends what it was!
I don't like the title. Filth is usually found outside and seems the wrong word for something inside the body. But I guess it depends what it was!
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.