Going to the Country -revised

Going to the Country -revised

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08-13-2012, 11:35 PM

it's just how it read to me. obviously, none of those things were of note to others, so i'm guessing my own take just hasn't been the same. it certainly reads well

I agree that the "preachiness" is not as heavy as in other poems; i wouldn't be expecting you to create pieces aimed to lecture, so the parts i noted would be tame in other situations, but felt heavier in the context.

Written only for you to consider.

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Going to the Country -revised - by penguin - 08-07-2012, 05:24 PM

RE: Going to the Country - by billy - 08-09-2012, 11:45 AM

RE: Going to the Country - by billy - 08-10-2012, 06:40 AM

RE: Going to the Country - by penguin - 08-10-2012, 11:15 PM

RE: Going to the Country - by billy - 08-11-2012, 08:38 AM

RE: Going to the Country - by addy - 08-11-2012, 08:51 AM

RE: Going to the Country - by penguin - 08-12-2012, 08:40 PM

RE: Going to the Country -revised - by billy - 08-13-2012, 12:27 PM

RE: Going to the Country -revised - by addy - 08-13-2012, 12:30 PM

RE: Going to the Country -revised - by Philatone - 08-13-2012, 02:40 PM

RE: Going to the Country -revised - by penguin - 08-13-2012, 06:27 PM

RE: Going to the Country -revised - by Philatone - 08-13-2012, 11:35 PM

RE: Going to the Country -revised - by tectak - 08-17-2012, 09:13 PM

RE: Going to the Country -revised - by penguin - 08-17-2012, 10:52 PM

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