08-13-2012, 09:10 PM
Wow, I can really relate to this. The ending line is so good. I can't even describe how much I like this. The only line that threw me off was
'while falling asleep to the new bedtime stories.'
I'm not sure what it is trying to convey but regardless I think the "to the" doesn't sound right.
'while falling asleep to the new bedtime stories.'
I'm not sure what it is trying to convey but regardless I think the "to the" doesn't sound right.