08-13-2012, 06:31 PM
It is good, Billy. The only other thing I'd suggest is to continue the sentence at the end of 2nd verse
so I could leave the harbour with my ship
to navigate the Firth of Forth, or skip
so I could leave the harbour with my ship
to navigate the Firth of Forth, or skip
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.