08-13-2012, 10:03 AM
A beautiful piece billy. Aside from the wonky meter in the third stanza (that everyone's pretty much dogpiled on 
) it reads well. The second stanza and the last couplet really got me.
) it reads well. The second stanza and the last couplet really got me.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?